Thursday, June 10, 2010

Because you left.

Dedicated to Arun, because you asked for it….
“Don’t you want to come out and play?” said the scrawny one. “No.” was his emphatic reply. “But why?” said scrawny adamantly. “It’s nothing. You go I don’t want to.” was all he said. “It’s her again, I know it.” Scrawny was sneering. “Get lost!” with that final note of anger he chased away a cackling scrawny…..
It was always her…
No matter where he went, she was there waiting naively for him. That heat of awkward embarrassment would eventually creep up on him, as soon as he would set his eyes on her. What did she want? He never gathered the courage to ask her this. The only plausible solution to this situation that his fleeting thoughts would offer was to run, just run like the wind. But she was there too, lingering like a tendril of memory, even as his feet pounded the earth trying to put some amount of physical distance between them. She was the one who initiated this, having moved in next to his neighborhood. He briefly remembered how he first met her. Playing along with his friends he felt someone watching his back. Turning to find out the inevitable, his breath was lost in her hazel eyes. Then he ran and he always did that ever since.
“So you finally decided to join us?” said the tall one. He nodded meekly and hoped his friends would let him play along. “Come on, then” said the wise one and without a hint of spite he melted into the group. His eyes constantly sought the familiar hazel angel, watching and waiting like always. She was not there, he realized awash with unexpected disappointment. “Your little friend moved out yesterday” remarked the wise one when he queried about her. “You, ok” said wise looking at his crestfallen face. “Do you like ice cream? Then come with me” without waiting for an answer he dragged him away. “I know how you must feel right now, but don’t be so distressed about it” the wise one plied with a friendly arm offering a melting cup. “It’s not like you won’t ever feel the same way as before. To find someone you care about is like looking for the right flavor of ice cream. There are numerous choices, and all you have to do is grab a spoon and taste them till you find your flavor.” What wise stated was even more incomprehensible to him than the girl from whom he ran away, never to be seen again. He went his way home.
Thirty years later……
“Don’t you want to go out and play?” said he to his son. “Dad, I was wondering how you and mom met for the first time” said his son rather timidly. “Son, all I did was grabbing a spoon” said his father looking at the mother and for a moment he felt lost in her hazel eyes.

*Disclaimer*
For the cynical kind who hates the rosy tinted ending, I do believe in happy endings, so go ahead sue me. The credit for the metaphorical spoon goes to Joey from F.R.I.E.N.D.S, watch the pilot episode for further information. The title of the story is the name of an episode from LOST. Yeah i know what a thief I am. For now I bid thee a fateful farewell…..but please leave thy valuable comments.

10 comments:

  1. Not that this little story of yours is even remotely related to me but thanks for dedicating it to me..
    And one more thing, I hope you've tasted the flavor you like, if you can get what I am talking about..;)

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  2. And btw, nice post. One of your best works till date I'll say. And I know that there are more to come.. :)

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  3. the taste of love,wonderful bablu,luvd it.. :)

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  4. Tablu the story teller is maturing...but mature with the flow...do not over mature yourself with respect to your age.Nice read..could have been presented a bit better..but you wont do that coz u r lazy

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  5. an excellent setup....very spontaneous writing....and gud characters.....I really hope there's more to come....just work out the part preceding the concluding paragraph.....

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  6. brilliant flow of narrative...well written yet again.
    I just loved these lines-
    "To find someone you care about is like looking for the right flavor of ice cream. There are numerous choices, and all you have to do is grab a spoon and taste them till you find your flavor."
    I'm your fan...:)

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  7. Really an elegant story of yours....gud characters, brilliant narrative style....really a commendable piece of work.....expecting to hear more from u dude....

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  8. so wen r u "grabbing the spoon" dewd??
    nicely written..

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  9. stumped, is all I have to say :), quite impressive this one...well whadya knw, my brothers' turning into a very adroit author...dont stop reading as I had told you in our previous conversation, reading good stuff will only add to ur repertoire...if u've ran out of steam reading the same stuff, grow out of it and read sm real good stuff I have come across off late...will tell u the next time we speak bout sm other books I came across...the narrative is really nice, keep going!

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